It is best to think of this as being closer to a micro analysis of the kind submitted for FM1 than it is some kind of broadly based production report. You should apply your Film Studies knowledge in order to evaluate aspects of their own work, for example, in terms of what you were trying to achieve and whether the creative decisions made proved to be appropriate ones. Certainly some reflection on creative intention within their chosen role, and an understanding of potential affect is advisable.

It is strongly recommended that you focus on precise moments, and particular key decisions made.

To help you write your script you can use the following questions as a guide:

• What were your overall aims of your project?
• What other short films influenced your work? Give an example of how and which film?
• Pick 3-5 significant parts of your short film and discuss what impact you wanted to have on the audience, how did you do this?
• What technical devices did you use in the construction of your short film?

You need to complete your evaluation/commentary by Friday 27th April

A2 Short Film Commentary handout

Examples of student commentary

We are really pleased with the hard work that went into making theses sequences and you should be pleased with the results.